final from Rya Nicholson on Vimeo.
Successes:
The upbeat tone and fast moving image goes well with the music and makes a fun, engaging tone of voice which is what we aimed for.
Certain parts like the bread being cut went well as we took the time to take a photo after each slice to create a smooth ripple effect which is satisfying to watch.
The writing written in sauce is also a success as it helps communicate the message through the most appropriate medium. Especially the play on words at the end, ‘spread the word’ where the actual word ‘word’ is spread.
Weaknesses:
We struggled with the timing of the video as it is a fairly long video now (1 min 43 seconds), however taking any parts out or speeding it up would either ruin the timing of video or defeat its purpose.
The video could also be seen as having too feminine colours due to the pink background. If we had more time we would have sourced a more neutral background.
The writing written in sauce is also a success as it helps communicate the message through the most appropriate medium. Especially the play on words at the end, ‘spread the word’ where the actual word ‘word’ is spread.
Weaknesses:
We struggled with the timing of the video as it is a fairly long video now (1 min 43 seconds), however taking any parts out or speeding it up would either ruin the timing of video or defeat its purpose.
The video could also be seen as having too feminine colours due to the pink background. If we had more time we would have sourced a more neutral background.
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